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Where I am…?
Where I’ve been…?
I don’t know…
I can’t think…
Was I here since always…?
Or I have just begun…?
Every moment I doubt…
…my own existence
I can see myself…
I can touch…
I get wet when it rains…
But I don’t feel anything…
Just the emptiness…
Is it a beginning or an end?
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What I did…?
What I said…?
I don’t know…
I can’t think…
Is this a reward…?
Or I committed a sin…?
Every moment I fight…
… My own resistance
I can see myself…
I can touch…
I get wet when it rains…
But I don’t feel anything…
Just the emptiness…
Neeraj, you have written it with a great feel! I loved it to pieces!
-Naima.
Thank you Naima.. but I still could not write the way I wanted to..
May be because for today, the quota had been done! Wait for the next day and what it brings to you
-Naima.
Keep smiling, it suits you
-Naima.
Sure I will .. thanks!
My pleasure as always
-Naima.
beautful poem with beautiful background! ur page now shines brightly!
Thank you! There is a lot more to do with this page .. lets see if it works.
wonderful poem and photography
Thank you Brad!
A bit sad, but beautiful! The pictures is also great and represents the poem perfectly!!! Great choice
Thank you Patricia!
beginning of the perfect writer !
Oh my!.. Thank you Prashant!
Reblogged this on onlinefunland.
wow! yu can really do wonders! Loved every word! <3
Thank you so much!